My first film, "A Christmas Gift"

[coolguy256]

about a week ago an idea struck me for a video that I thought was a pretty ingenious idea. I then relayed it to my brother who agreed that the idea was rather good and could make for a good, entertaining video if done right. So, the next day me and my brother quickly gathered are video equipment and starting filming. Three weeks later (you wouldn't believe all the mishaps that made sure to show there ugly head and delay this project during filming, editing, compressing, and uploading, but that I will save for another time) we have finished are little Filming Project (Which I like to call "A Christmas Gift") and finally got them uploaded on Youtube.



Part 1:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=fDc2Ro70-Fo

Part 2:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=uE7A8UcCzxs

Its a tale about two kids who's only wish for Christmas is to get a Nintendo Wii, but sadly might not be able to because of course the thing is almost impossible to find. But once they find out that mom did indeed find one for them, see if they are able to fight away the temptations to play with there gift before Christmas. it is an 11 minute short film made for everyone.


I think it starts of a little slow, but give it a chance and hopeful you will enjoy viewing "A Chistmas Gift" as mch as I enjoyed filming it.

Any feedback is welcome.

[ShinyCreek]

You're right, it does start off slow. Your editing doesn't flow very well either. A great first film, but keep it up!

[coolguy256]

Most of the feedback I have gotten so far has said it starts off slow, so my next film I will make sure that does not happen again. And my editing program erased all my work I had done on the film before, so I had to re-edit it, and it made the editing kinda have a rushed feeling.

Thanks for the feedback.