looking for video critique

[ericgcollyer]

My friends and I recently created a video for a contest and I am looking for people to critique it so that we can improve. Let me know what you think and let me know where we can improve! If there is a more appropriate place to post this let me know. Or if there is a better forum to post this on, let me know! Thanks in advance. To get to the video, go to youtube.com and search "do the dew at uvu." our submission is titled "Do the Dew @ UVU 2010 - 9"

[cdryden]

I thought it was ok. Good editing.

[I♥♫♪♫♫♪♪♫]

Yes #9 was quite good, but why not actually design a label to match the outro logo? You wont be able to enter the submissions in any contests with copyright infringment like that.... In Canada it still says "Mountain Dew".... Nice work lads!