my website

[andytones]

hey guys,
check out my website i am still making it this is only the first page, its the first page ive ever made.

https://www.geocities.com/andytones/divxdomain

[benedict]

Everyone loves their first web page!!!

Actually, it's better than most people's first web page. You might want to start the page with a description of what the page attempts to do. (You just get right into instructions without telling the viewer what to expect from the page.) Also, I got a script error ("access denied"), but that's probably caused by geocities tampering with your page and probably nothing you have control over.

A word of caution: Writing web pages/sites can be habit forming! And if you think there's a lot to learn about computer video, wait til you start learning about all the toys you can put into web pages.

[khp]

And whats with all the shouting ?

[UncasMS]

improve your screenshots or get rid of them entirely - they are worthless the way they are now.